Adan knew what he wanted from his living...he looked up diary and rhushed to meet Sana....he knew that his relationship with her was a transcient melodrama.seeking to end the dis-harmony, he expressed his 10-yr plans to her. appaled at such a utopic functioning of his mind, sana left the bar. Adan's content just got sterdier. the last sip of her cappuchino summed up San for him. his esoteric ideals of judgement failed to meet the hunger of a civilised society.
speaking from the terrace, he told her one last time that he had loved her like none before.....he had to take the jump...he had to start his career as a bunjee-jumper......yes!!his 10-yr plan......to be the ace bunjee-jumper.....ridiculous detritus of an exalted mind....
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poetry: feeble excretions of a diseased mind wanting self glorification... or is it just me?
i hav never ever witnessed such an honest criticism man....an author has indeed been made happy....
cousin's criticism!
I like this,and the fact that the expression has been made without having wasted too many words.But I wish it hadn't been typed in such haste.
@ankita
yeah, i agree....haste was what produced this piece
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